Opinions on a song i wrote? (:?

I havnt figured out the title. But this is just a quick little song i
wrote. Changes/Opinions needed, cause im only 14, so im a little new
to this. Thanks (:

(Verse)

so whats the story this time?
are you tellin her everything...
like you did when you were mine?

and does she really understand?
when all you do is lie to her
over and over again?

(Chorus)

this time will you get caught, red-handed or will you
wait till things are not, going as planned
how will you destroy her dreams, like you did mine
cause i know things arnt the way they seem
behind your blue eyes

(Verse)

how is she taking your games?
does she love the fact
that shes being played?

and i think its funny how you say shes the best,
when in the past
you were tellin that to the rest of us
and im wonderin if...

(Chorus)

this time will you get caught, red-handed or will you
wait till things are not, going as planned
how will you destroy her dreams, like you did mine
cause i know things arnt the way they seem
behind your blue eyes

(Bridge)

you are so hypnotizing
yeah, you mesmerized me
but now i live to tell the story

(Chorus)

of how you got caught, red-handed and how you
waited till things were not, going as planned
and how you destroyed my dreams, and said it was all fine
cause things wernt the way they seemed
the whole entire time

this time will you get caught, red-handed or will you
wait till things are not, going as planned
how will you destroy her dreams, like you did mine
cause i know things arnt the way they seem
behind your.......lies.